Monthly Archives: May 2014

Take a look at this Year 4!

Quietly, I opened the creaky steel gates and all the beauty unfolded before me.  This place was unrivalled to the world. The beautiful flowers and roses were all around me. I could smell the freshness, feel the breeze blowing against me. As I approached the lovely patch of flowers, I looked around at all the tall trees blowing in the wind.

 

TGJ, left this piece of descriptive writing for us all to read on our blog.  I’d really like to find out what happened next.  I think that it is a lovely start to a story.  I wonder if TGJ will write the next part?  Can’t wait to find out.

Mrs J